Jack and Jill

    The following descriptive article is an collaboration unscrambled with many paragraphs from different groups which wrote their own thing based on the picture they got. To achieve fluency and coherence, the fragments were revised and the plots are adjusted a  little bit before they were emerged into one piece of literary. After my team work out the whole thing, I privately altered the dictions, added and lessen some details before I presented it right here on my blog.        

It all happened on a cold and rainy day last month. After work, Jill drove her car on her way home. Suddenly, the car had a flat tyre. She was all alone when she got off the car and managed to work it out. All of a sudden, a man named Jack approached her and caressed her on cheeks. He said,” I know a inn nearby and I can take you there.”

    They opened the door of the inn and Jill looked frightened. She told Jack that the vampire wants one of them to die. She was too shocked to utter another word and she fainted.

    When she woke up, Jack was very mad. Jack raged on, “I've have had enough of your bizarre action and insanity. There’s no vampire and you’re paranoid! I want to find another woman!“. Jack grasped Jill by her shoulder but she, with all the strength, shook her shoulder off Jack's muscular hands and snarled hysterically, “Dare you touch me! “. Then, Jill slapped across his face, which then turned burning red, and yelled, “Get the hell away from me! “. “Fine,” shrugged Jack. Secretly, Jill still loved Jack and begged Jack to sleep with her for one more night.

    They slept sweetly together in bed at night. All of a sudden, a dark shade looking like a mixture of  cat and octopus cast on the wall. When Jack noticed the spooky shadow, he screamed.

    He had bad breath which frightened the woman so much and she was dying to escape. They calmed down and found the horrible shadow belong to two kittens.

    The woman softly brushed the cat’s fur. At the same time, the man played with the other cat. They look at the cats affectionately. Thanks to the two cats, they got closer to one another again.